tbh while this story was pretty good for it’s time, in “second life” stories i prefer to mc have not himself detached that much from the previous owner of the body yet taemin never really put an effort to be an symphatic towards siwon, bond with his wounds; let alone just him nobody gaf about that poor boy’s misery, his backstory really disgusted me sm and i was really sad for him as well, he needed more depth. if anyone read monochrome rumor they’ll know what i meant, that story handled how two bodies alligned pretty well
tbh while this story was pretty good for it’s time, in “second life” stories i prefer to mc have not himself detached that much from the previous owner of the body yet taemin never really put an effort to be an symphatic towards siwon, bond with his wounds; let alone just him nobody gaf about that poor boy’s misery, his backstory really disgusted me sm and i was really sad for him as well, he needed more depth. if anyone read monochrome rumor they’ll know what i meant, that story handled how two bodies alligned pretty well