Like it feels so empty and too rushed, and yes, I know that this is a one shot but please I have read other one shots that have completely covered the missing scenarios... Especially what they did to Munetaka... That scenario was good and the reaction of everybody other than Munetaka was valid... But so long... Especially that black hair model dude that fought Munetaka, he got so many lines and covered so many things THAT COMPARED TO MUNETAKA'S CONVERSATION WITH AYATO, IT FELT SO HALF ASSED, EMPTY AND SHALLOW.
His redemption arc or whatev you call it was truly so short that it felt nothing to me
Oh and the black hair model dude's apology too towards Munetaka was also shallow like dude only gave him a gift and say things like sorry and that's it... As if he didn't order the guards to throw him unto a bush in public.....
I wanted something cute out of this story but instead I got ragebaited by the writing of this story
I guess the author couldn't balance out the scenarios cuz Munetaka's apology felt so short af
Like it feels so empty and too rushed, and yes, I know that this is a one shot but please I have read other one shots that have completely covered the missing scenarios... Especially what they did to Munetaka... That scenario was good and the reaction of everybody other than Munetaka was valid... But so long... Especially that black hair model dude that fought Munetaka, he got so many lines and covered so many things THAT COMPARED TO MUNETAKA'S CONVERSATION WITH AYATO, IT FELT SO HALF ASSED, EMPTY AND SHALLOW.
His redemption arc or whatev you call it was truly so short that it felt nothing to me
Oh and the black hair model dude's apology too towards Munetaka was also shallow like dude only gave him a gift and say things like sorry and that's it... As if he didn't order the guards to throw him unto a bush in public.....
I wanted something cute out of this story but instead I got ragebaited by the writing of this story
I guess the author couldn't balance out the scenarios cuz Munetaka's apology felt so short af