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its hot asf but its being executed horribly with the lack story progression

haven July 5, 2026 3:45 am

idek what this season was about nothing progressed, lowk no good plot and nothing about the characters were revealed ... atp it feels like I was just reading for the smut which sucks bc it has sm potential for a good storyline but the author is getting too deep in adding every kink in the book making them fuck for 5 chapters straight back to back without progressing the plot and then ends the season. like holy shit its sm potential with the characters and the whole age gap couple trope, like its hot asf but its being executed horribly with the lack of story progression

Responses
    Jolly July 5, 2026 6:32 am

    Lol it’s author basically said it’s pornwha, plot might not ever really get development deeply bcs they just wanted to draw this dynamic. I’d drop if you want a story with plot ngl

    AeriusWitch July 5, 2026 3:42 pm

    It’s… it’s a bdsm porn manhwa idk what u expect ofc they’re focusing on the bdsm

    haven July 6, 2026 12:39 am
    It’s… it’s a bdsm porn manhwa idk what u expect ofc they’re focusing on the bdsm AeriusWitch

    im not saying they shouldnt focus it, I get that, however this has so much potential for a better storyline. thats my only complaint. like it still should have some plot with it. so much of it was ignored and didnt get into the depth of it. without it it feels repetitive and a bit boring. especially for a popular story like this, ive read a lot more bdsm manhwas that had a excellent storyline however this one is just lacking in that area which is why I wished it was better because the art is good and the relationship dynamic as well. but theres not like anything big happening outside of the constant hookups with the characters. im just saying there should be something more because it feels lacking. :)

    haven July 6, 2026 12:41 am
    Lol it’s author basically said it’s pornwha, plot might not ever really get development deeply bcs they just wanted to draw this dynamic. I’d drop if you want a story with plot ngl Jolly

    yeah I understand , its just dissapoiniign that a story like this thats also popular really doesnt have a good plot outside the smut, it just feels like something is missing and it didnt even have to be huge but it feels boring when the plot isnt that engaging . esp for their dynamic the characters couldve deserved a better storyline.

    Jolly July 6, 2026 1:54 am
    yeah I understand , its just dissapoiniign that a story like this thats also popular really doesnt have a good plot outside the smut, it just feels like something is missing and it didnt even have to be huge bu... haven

    Right, I wish they’d start to touch more on Misters job lol, but it just might not happen. Pretty disappointing because you can tell by this story that the author is obviously capable of writing well. I do greatly appreciate all the smut regardless tho