This was somewhat annoying to read? They kept jumping from one scene to the other there’s no consistency in the pacing of the events they’d bring something just to talk about something else next not to mention the back and forth between the past and the future was messey honestly sometimes it felt like they were talking amongst themselves and the reader was just there tryna figure out what they’re trying to say……anyways side stories said summer?? It’s been a year and a half……
This was somewhat annoying to read? They kept jumping from one scene to the other there’s no consistency in the pacing of the events they’d bring something just to talk about something else next not to mention the back and forth between the past and the future was messey honestly sometimes it felt like they were talking amongst themselves and the reader was just there tryna figure out what they’re trying to say……anyways side stories said summer?? It’s been a year and a half……