1st of all, I'm glad the author drew girl boobs really well. Her nips and the way seme pinches them make it feel realistic, I like that frr
2nd. I also realllyyy like that the uke wants to experience being a girl because most of the time in bls the guys usually find that being on the receiving side is humiliating or shit like that
3rd. I like how possessive the uke is. We, yes WE love possessive ukes.
4th. I'm glad a bl author isn't afraid to draw peak straight smut and not fetishize gay sex
5th. I feel as though it would've been way more amazing if the seme was bi/pan or demi (so it could be like a "it doesn't matter what sex you are, i just love you" kind of thing), he's a gay man and he feels really uncomfortable around the uke when he's hypnotized as a girl because he just doesn't like women sexually nor romantically so it's an ick.
6th. There should've been more interactions which didn't involve the hypnosis thing or sex. 70% of the story the seme just looked extremely uncomfortable and weirded out, the romance didn't have time to develop. Overall, it's an amazing concept but it's mediocre execution at best. This could be so much more if I'm being honest
I have manyyy things to say about this,
1st of all, I'm glad the author drew girl boobs really well. Her nips and the way seme pinches them make it feel realistic, I like that frr
2nd. I also realllyyy like that the uke wants to experience being a girl because most of the time in bls the guys usually find that being on the receiving side is humiliating or shit like that
3rd. I like how possessive the uke is. We, yes WE love possessive ukes.
4th. I'm glad a bl author isn't afraid to draw peak straight smut and not fetishize gay sex
5th. I feel as though it would've been way more amazing if the seme was bi/pan or demi (so it could be like a "it doesn't matter what sex you are, i just love you" kind of thing), he's a gay man and he feels really uncomfortable around the uke when he's hypnotized as a girl because he just doesn't like women sexually nor romantically so it's an ick.
6th. There should've been more interactions which didn't involve the hypnosis thing or sex. 70% of the story the seme just looked extremely uncomfortable and weirded out, the romance didn't have time to develop.
Overall, it's an amazing concept but it's mediocre execution at best. This could be so much more if I'm being honest