Honestly this story and the romance between the two is good but I have some trouble with this story and finishing it (second time reading) I don’t like how toxic the bottoms friends are and his family they all seem really snobby especially to the top and I also don’t like how the bottoms is always cursing the top out about staying away from his friends and family but continues to bring him around them. Also the author could have touched on the tops passions a lot more I really wanted to seem him continue to swim and to try again and build goals and accomplishments he wanted for himself I thought the with their relationship it would help him come up with the things he wanted out of life instead focusing so much on his debt and letting loose this story is beautiful from the outside but when you look inside you see a lot of plot holes.
Honestly this story and the romance between the two is good but I have some trouble with this story and finishing it (second time reading) I don’t like how toxic the bottoms friends are and his family they all seem really snobby especially to the top and I also don’t like how the bottoms is always cursing the top out about staying away from his friends and family but continues to bring him around them. Also the author could have touched on the tops passions a lot more I really wanted to seem him continue to swim and to try again and build goals and accomplishments he wanted for himself I thought the with their relationship it would help him come up with the things he wanted out of life instead focusing so much on his debt and letting loose this story is beautiful from the outside but when you look inside you see a lot of plot holes.