(Vague, non-specific review but it does mention some things)
It was an interesting premise, but it was poorly executed. Not even a "shut your brain off and enjoy " and more a "this shit doesn't even hold up against a stray thought."
They don't actually give the MC true struggles that last chapters upon chapters- everything is always neatly resolved within 3-5 chapters, minimal effort, no real lasting impacto onto the next issue. They're no mental or emotional growth,just a default sort of cleverness and stubbornness so it makes it hard to really root for her outside of the concept. Like, what her flaws? Her motivation outside of the ML? What friendships does she maintain? How does she interact with the religion in that world besides money? How does that work? When /where did she even get the chance to set up her first business adventure? That was far too fleshed out for just pocket change (and no, I'm not referencing her first legitimate one).
The ML is an prop a majority of the time, and doesn't really do much until the last third of the story where they try to hammer home that he's actually super smart, loyal,and hot and also super hot (did they also mention hot
(Vague, non-specific review but it does mention some things)
It was an interesting premise, but it was poorly executed. Not even a "shut your brain off and enjoy " and more a "this shit doesn't even hold up against a stray thought."
They don't actually give the MC true struggles that last chapters upon chapters- everything is always neatly resolved within 3-5 chapters, minimal effort, no real lasting impacto onto the next issue. They're no mental or emotional growth,just a default sort of cleverness and stubbornness so it makes it hard to really root for her outside of the concept. Like, what her flaws? Her motivation outside of the ML? What friendships does she maintain? How does she interact with the religion in that world besides money? How does that work? When /where did she even get the chance to set up her first business adventure? That was far too fleshed out for just pocket change (and no, I'm not referencing her first legitimate one).
The ML is an prop a majority of the time, and doesn't really do much until the last third of the story where they try to hammer home that he's actually super smart, loyal,and hot and also super hot (did they also mention hot