This bl made me laugh, made me puzzled, and made me nut. The dark romance is very good, but the writing is questionable. The bottom is likeable and he actually has a personality that is brought out in SOME chapters, but not fully explored in my honest opinion. The top is decent, I liked when he showed his alpha fangs, his jd vance eyeliner is on point. I'd say this is probably the most vanilla dark romance (aside the assaults that the bottom goes through). My favorite chapter was the one where the bottom calls the top beautiful when he first lays his eyes on the alpha at that polo game, and then we get a beautiful shot of the alpha staring at the camera and looking like a horse. My other favorite thing about this whole story is how often the bottom ends up in hospitals like he's got Markiplier syndrome. I'd say this is a great comedy if you squint. I stopped taking everything seriously when the bottom lost his memory. The smut was fire tho.
This bl made me laugh, made me puzzled, and made me nut. The dark romance is very good, but the writing is questionable. The bottom is likeable and he actually has a personality that is brought out in SOME chapters, but not fully explored in my honest opinion. The top is decent, I liked when he showed his alpha fangs, his jd vance eyeliner is on point. I'd say this is probably the most vanilla dark romance (aside the assaults that the bottom goes through). My favorite chapter was the one where the bottom calls the top beautiful when he first lays his eyes on the alpha at that polo game, and then we get a beautiful shot of the alpha staring at the camera and looking like a horse. My other favorite thing about this whole story is how often the bottom ends up in hospitals like he's got Markiplier syndrome. I'd say this is a great comedy if you squint. I stopped taking everything seriously when the bottom lost his memory. The smut was fire tho.