I rlly like this story at the beginning but with it being dragged on with specific things but by the end it doesn’t really matter as much. The romance felt a bit force. It didn’t really show the process of the fl falling in love with the ml. And there’s kinda like steps with like romance first they hold hands then like get a bit touchy then they kiss. It feels the romance between the two wasn’t focused and just like rushed. I wish we had more focus on the knight too how it ended with him. As well his emotions and see a closure for him. The ending felt unsatisfying in my opinion. But good start.
I rlly like this story at the beginning but with it being dragged on with specific things but by the end it doesn’t really matter as much. The romance felt a bit force. It didn’t really show the process of the fl falling in love with the ml. And there’s kinda like steps with like romance first they hold hands then like get a bit touchy then they kiss. It feels the romance between the two wasn’t focused and just like rushed. I wish we had more focus on the knight too how it ended with him. As well his emotions and see a closure for him. The ending felt unsatisfying in my opinion. But good start.