1.jinx ( 1st chaptwr mahworing in same bed with other then replace with bottom) 2.oemgaverse half baked if you imprint yiu can not hv sex with other but here what the point him having sex with other but can not help his rut it really inaukting reader intelligent he better pour some money in reserche and medication.. it just very messy oemgarse and brainless reason the force plot of auhor want to thick black flag manwhore promiscious ML but the reason is crumbling it contradicting each other .. 3 ganster thugh low tide in twilight riff off with debt motivation...3. Fake protitued ML well so many title 4.reuniun 5.first love trope it like auhtor just juggle all the bl troupe with bad writing and the character of ML top is so chaotic like 3 different person with sorry 2 bipolar syndrom.. it very poorly written and poorly wooven ... and bad mixture of many various torupe of BL... or course rape and orfgy must be check like it is mandatory..you relaly can not that black flag Ml become monogamous with no reason.. overal it is smeel like new author with limited poor writing i hope this type of new artist just with just being artist and adapted more famous novel rather than making this poorly written messy Bl.. look CR jade for example... not forcing being writer isntead adapting novel
1.jinx ( 1st chaptwr mahworing in same bed with other then replace with bottom)
2.oemgaverse half baked if you imprint yiu can not hv sex with other but here what the point him having sex with other but can not help his rut it really inaukting reader intelligent he better pour some money in reserche and medication.. it just very messy oemgarse and brainless reason the force plot of auhor want to thick black flag manwhore promiscious ML but the reason is crumbling it contradicting each other .. 3 ganster thugh low tide in twilight riff off with debt motivation...3. Fake protitued ML well so many title 4.reuniun 5.first love trope it like auhtor just juggle all the bl troupe with bad writing and the character of ML top is so chaotic like 3 different person with sorry 2 bipolar syndrom.. it very poorly written and poorly wooven ... and bad mixture of many various torupe of BL... or course rape and orfgy must be check like it is mandatory..you relaly can not that black flag Ml become monogamous with no reason.. overal it is smeel like new author with limited poor writing i hope this type of new artist just with just being artist and adapted more famous novel rather than making this poorly written messy Bl.. look CR jade for example... not forcing being writer isntead adapting novel