well it good but at first. At the first part i found it very interesting kasi theres the thought that what will happen if laila found out that sion knew that they regresses. But in the middle part its kinda boring. I expect to much on what will the reaction of laila be but its kinda "nuh, just forget it" vibes and i hate the fact that they made me confused about their lifespan like it made me analyze it more.
The time skip also is awful. Shes ten then suddenly she's 13 then she turned 15 like? let be breath brah.
The reason why Fls father burned and kill sions family aloo arghhh like we didn't really know why he do that.
But still I read it. Well its not totally a trash but its not good also (for me). But give this a try guys! Malay n'yo diba magustuhan n'yo.
well it good but at first. At the first part i found it very interesting kasi theres the thought that what will happen if laila found out that sion knew that they regresses. But in the middle part its kinda boring. I expect to much on what will the reaction of laila be but its kinda "nuh, just forget it" vibes and i hate the fact that they made me confused about their lifespan like it made me analyze it more.
The time skip also is awful. Shes ten then suddenly she's 13 then she turned 15 like? let be breath brah.
The reason why Fls father burned and kill sions family aloo arghhh like we didn't really know why he do that.
But still I read it. Well its not totally a trash but its not good also (for me). But give this a try guys! Malay n'yo diba magustuhan n'yo.