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definitely had the same thought
not necessarily that the pacing is too quick but it's more like every third panel is missing or there's just some lack of explanation or something. it just feels weirdly unfinished.
Just read this in one sitting and idk if it's just me or is the pacing too fast? The emotional transition feel a bit forced like it goes from sad to humor too quickly. Don't get me wrong, the tension between jaeil and seungyeon is great but around ch 11-29 i found myself stumbling over the messy internal monologues and awkward timeline. Still, the plot has potential so im gonna marinate this and come back later