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Very underwhelming

Ilovetopswhowhimper July 13, 2026 7:57 am

I don't get it, firstly the way they cry is making me laugh "sob sob" like if you don't release more tears rn, also the Mc's death didn't even settle before they jumped to time reverse also won't teara and chongk forget about mc?? Like what is the thought process what if bro doesn't come back so Ml will suffer the grief alone? And no one will remember mc except for ml, like what hold on lemme rewrite this real quick, "they weep acc weeping in the dungeon not having the time to process anything else except for mc's death at that time. 2moths later, everyone around Korea knows about their defeat and celebrate but the guild remains quiet everyone still not over Mc's death especially Ml, Ml pulls a hawkmoth and preserves mc body, Ml is very miserable and cannot reverse time because he promised Mc he wouldn't anymore, Mc died the system realised bro is error as it was processing the death, bro gets sent back home" that's semi finale, let's see what the finale acc is to see if I will continue the fanfic

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    Xan3 July 13, 2026 7:04 pm

    This is so good. I kinda want the story goes like this.. Huhu.. ╥﹏╥

    Ilovetopswhowhimper July 26, 2026 9:49 am
    This is so good. I kinda want the story goes like this.. Huhu.. ╥﹏╥ Xan3

    Um...have u seen the ending? It seems like i acc have to make an acc fanfic ending

    Xan3 July 26, 2026 12:24 pm

    Just read that, It's so confusing
    But i saw someone post about the novel ending, it's actually good and the ending is just mixed up side story too... Lolol.
    But Please make a fanfic huhu i need to see this type of ending...