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PLOT DEVELOPMENTTT

Yaoireader July 13, 2026 3:29 pm

I feel like the chapters are wasted with too much sex instead of story development

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    Kat July 13, 2026 3:33 pm

    That's how it is in the novel though... This is very very much like the novel, same tempo, same plot, same amount of sex and plot development lol

    piedpiper13 July 13, 2026 3:39 pm

    I was coming to say that too, I mean I appreciate the efforts of the creator but I feel like at this point of the story, I'd rather know what's happening and some progress with the plot rather than just reading the smut that goes on for 2 chapters and there's nothing new in that

    Kat July 13, 2026 8:27 pm
    I was coming to say that too, I mean I appreciate the efforts of the creator but I feel like at this point of the story, I'd rather know what's happening and some progress with the plot rather than just reading... piedpiper13

    I get it but we're about to finish the story literally, there's no more plot except to what's coming in next week with the visit of that girl, other than that, there's literally no more plot lol

    The extras are filled with a lot of sex too lol