For some reason everything about this story pisses me off…the art is godly but the faces and expressions are derpy at the same time, they’re supposedly bonded but feel like less than strangers, like they’re being forced to get along, even in their moments of chemistry, they’re like blocks of ice. The manager is so indecisive yet he knows what he wants, there is an arrogance to his apathy which I really dislike…like I think this story had potential to be one of the greats if both main characters had a different personality. Like the Seme has carried his unrequited feelings for so long that his feelings are way too intense for this level of interaction or relationship and the manager‘s feelings are too shallow for what the story claims he feels…overall I just think this story is about the author trying to write smut while giving it a random storyline and it’s a shame because I see the vision but it is too shallow to really move me or get me invested. Like even this first sex scene…what is this timing?! What the fuck was that dialogue progression?? Why are they so annoying till the end?? Like imagine if their first kiss was really intense, maybe full of anger and resentment from Jaegyeom but turning into longing and that’s how the manager realised how much he was liked by that boy since all those years ago…like show don’t TELL. This story has been blah blah blah only, but it should be showing us. Too much dialogue and unnecessary scenes…we have seen more chemistry with that actor and manager than with our lead. We needed a damn confession, a heart wrenching angst filled one, a passionate kiss, TENSION, longing!! Before this sex scene happened. So it could be the payoff we deserved. And what we got was „ur an omega, join this competition, no, join the olympics in, no, do this, no, sign this contract and have sex with me“ ugh… Also these two speak 2 different languages and have no common ground. It’s really frustrating! I feel sad. Might be an unpopular opinion but yeah that’s my feeling And we’re gonna end up him getting pregnant and resigning and going away to raise a child and meeting him later or something.
For some reason everything about this story pisses me off…the art is godly but the faces and expressions are derpy at the same time, they’re supposedly bonded but feel like less than strangers, like they’re being forced to get along, even in their moments of chemistry, they’re like blocks of ice. The manager is so indecisive yet he knows what he wants, there is an arrogance to his apathy which I really dislike…like I think this story had potential to be one of the greats if both main characters had a different personality. Like the Seme has carried his unrequited feelings for so long that his feelings are way too intense for this level of interaction or relationship and the manager‘s feelings are too shallow for what the story claims he feels…overall I just think this story is about the author trying to write smut while giving it a random storyline and it’s a shame because I see the vision but it is too shallow to really move me or get me invested. Like even this first sex scene…what is this timing?! What the fuck was that dialogue progression?? Why are they so annoying till the end??
Like imagine if their first kiss was really intense, maybe full of anger and resentment from Jaegyeom but turning into longing and that’s how the manager realised how much he was liked by that boy since all those years ago…like show don’t TELL. This story has been blah blah blah only, but it should be showing us. Too much dialogue and unnecessary scenes…we have seen more chemistry with that actor and manager than with our lead.
We needed a damn confession, a heart wrenching angst filled one, a passionate kiss, TENSION, longing!! Before this sex scene happened. So it could be the payoff we deserved.
And what we got was „ur an omega, join this competition, no, join the olympics in, no, do this, no, sign this contract and have sex with me“ ugh…
Also these two speak 2 different languages and have no common ground. It’s really frustrating! I feel sad.
Might be an unpopular opinion but yeah that’s my feeling
And we’re gonna end up him getting pregnant and resigning and going away to raise a child and meeting him later or something.