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Really like this but

Weirdlylovely July 13, 2026 11:59 pm

The way the creator choses to change scenes Is a bit weird. We'd be in one scene it'll switch to a moment after whatever was happening in scene 1 and while in the current scene(scene2) we'll have a flashback to show us how the first scene ended which is a common thing when wanting to leave a mini cliff hanger so we'd be left wondering how did the first scene play out and it's done quite often in other stories as well but this story does it like twice or three times a chapter which just becomes repetitive and confusing like why do I need to see a flashback of the scene from two panels ago? if it just played out fully then continued on instead of cutting, going forward, then back, then forward again we have a better flow

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