streets are saying this was beautifully written,,, STREETS ARE WRONG!!!
just because a story is so disturbing that you could physically feel the disgust and pain in your stomach doesn't mean it's well-written. being affected while reading this ≠ good writing. it just means you're uncomfortable. i can't deny that the author's pretty good at making readers feel physically uncomfortable and disgusted, though. i'll give them that.
don't get me wrong, i genuinely enjoy psychological horror a lot. i even read this thoroughly until the last uploaded chapter before making my point.
but this is just a pure mess. there isn't even a clear storyline, and most readers still don't know why his friends, who used to be so close to him, suddenly started doing all this to him. like, one of them seemed fucked up from the beginning, okay, whatever. but the other two guys, who seemed pretty normal, suddenly developed a rapist/abuser streak after doing it with the MC once? it genuinely felt like these characters were created solely to rape and abuse the MC.
one thing that really made me believe this is fetish material is how detailed the rape and abuse scenes are. most chapters are dominated by rape and non-con. the scenes are drawn extremely detailed despite having little to no dialogue besides moans and the fwop-fwop noises, and the story progression slows down just to accommodate those scenes.
also, it irritates me that there are still people going around rinsing down and calling these criminals "black flag BL tops." like, no. these aren't your evil yandere dadas.
streets are saying this was beautifully written,,, STREETS ARE WRONG!!!
just because a story is so disturbing that you could physically feel the disgust and pain in your stomach doesn't mean it's well-written. being affected while reading this ≠ good writing. it just means you're uncomfortable. i can't deny that the author's pretty good at making readers feel physically uncomfortable and disgusted, though. i'll give them that.
don't get me wrong, i genuinely enjoy psychological horror a lot. i even read this thoroughly until the last uploaded chapter before making my point.
but this is just a pure mess. there isn't even a clear storyline, and most readers still don't know why his friends, who used to be so close to him, suddenly started doing all this to him. like, one of them seemed fucked up from the beginning, okay, whatever. but the other two guys, who seemed pretty normal, suddenly developed a rapist/abuser streak after doing it with the MC once? it genuinely felt like these characters were created solely to rape and abuse the MC.
one thing that really made me believe this is fetish material is how detailed the rape and abuse scenes are. most chapters are dominated by rape and non-con. the scenes are drawn extremely detailed despite having little to no dialogue besides moans and the fwop-fwop noises, and the story progression slows down just to accommodate those scenes.
also, it irritates me that there are still people going around rinsing down and calling these criminals "black flag BL tops." like, no. these aren't your evil yandere dadas.
they're criminals.