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Weird pacing & Lack of Expressions

MoonShine July 17, 2026 1:53 pm

It was kind of disappointing tbh. The story was complex and intriguing but the execution was very sloppy. The pacing of the story was very awkward and sometimes it felt like it was going very slowly and then suddenly bam soo much happened in one episode. I had high expectations for this. I love a omegaverse story. And it was very hyped up also. But the lack of expressions and awkward pacing made it a very weird story. The ending was also super rushed. It ended suddenly without tightening the loose ends.
The Romance also felt forced tbh. The alpha clearly had abandonment issues and the omega also suffered mentally. These issues weren't explored at all that's why I couldn't connect with their romance at all. The intimate moments also felt super awkward for the lack of expressions.
Plus after the mc recovered his memories everything happened so suddenly that it felt like I was jumping through chapters and missing plot points. The weird monologues also didn't help.

Overall the story plotline had potential but the execution was a flop for me

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