Ngl same for the sake that it took her ex lover sexually harassing her to realize that no one loves her but when ML says he do, she does a full 180 and goes yeah I love him. I feel like the whole hating thing could’ve went longer which can at least build some trust than having the next plot obstacle be oh “he doesn’t want children cause he “hates” them thing.
You’re right but that wasn’t even my issue. The plot expects me to believe she knew he was messing with other girls but was too innocent to see he was a fuckboy. She instantly retaliates after he kissed her, but her husband whom she’s hated for 4 years can start to sexually assault her and she forgives it because he “loves her.” Flashback of why he loved her is just him thirsting for a virgin. But yeah her innocent little but has no issue climbing on top of him after the confession and he basically fucks the hatred out of her lmao. I just don’t get what they were doing for 4 whole years that he couldn’t prove he loved her but one night of forcing her into bed was enough to fix everything lmao.
Yknow what… my mistake for expecting a decent plot or good characters in a smut short story