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Thank you I was thinking of reading but my least LEAST FAVE trope is memory lost and even worse if it's not handled properly
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Thank you I was thinking of reading but my least LEAST FAVE trope is memory lost and even worse if it's not handled properly
first problem i have is with the memory loss trope
IT'S NOT HANDLED WELL AT ALL
why add it what the fuck is it, how does it impact the story, and if it does make it make sense, his behavior is not of someone who doesn't have his memory...
second, jihoo man his character is not done well at all, loves his brother or whatever is supposed to be cunning and vicious but i don't feel anything from him except for mysterious confused vibes
third, the plot doesn't flow properly, it could've been such a good story about the greedy rich father who adopted children just to showcase them around and get benefits but it's just weirdly done
overall i wanted the story to be stronger, the potential was there, even the romance got wasted... oh man