Could have been better. Uke is a little shameless to not realize that his unrequited love needs to end. Like literally. He clung on to him too long. His drinking habit, whining and unreasonable dislike, anger for Seme didn't leave a good taste. On the other hand I wish the seme would have a stronger backbone. Like, Uke really did not wanted him. He should have let him go or at least give him space to think about it. He came too strong. I did not enjoy most of the story because Uke was already in love with someone else and did not a little bit interested with seme. They should have give it time to develop some feelings. If it wasn't for the murder change thing, they wouldn't be able to move on in their relationship. And one last point, SMUT WAS INCREDIBLE.
Could have been better. Uke is a little shameless to not realize that his unrequited love needs to end. Like literally. He clung on to him too long. His drinking habit, whining and unreasonable dislike, anger for Seme didn't leave a good taste. On the other hand I wish the seme would have a stronger backbone. Like, Uke really did not wanted him. He should have let him go or at least give him space to think about it. He came too strong. I did not enjoy most of the story because Uke was already in love with someone else and did not a little bit interested with seme. They should have give it time to develop some feelings. If it wasn't for the murder change thing, they wouldn't be able to move on in their relationship. And one last point, SMUT WAS INCREDIBLE.