The door is that way bum.
why do yall hate any form of criticism ive been reading this story since it's uploaded and I like it, but op is right. It follows the very annoying trope of childish ml who goes around acting like a spoilt brat while simultaneously "controlling" the mc.
like realistically how are you gonna go and yell at a grown man because he went for a swim and that same grown man is so nice, that he leaves and offers to wash this guy's clothes for him...
and im not even criticising the story itself, it's established why the characters behave this way -- hajoon is nice because he's in love with seme but it is such a common and frustrating trope to read, you can't be mad that people are criticising it.
They're not attacking or making fun of anyone for enjoying this story, they're just giving their opinion. But anytime someone on this website says anything contrary to the top comments, it's "why are you even reading" like are we not allowed to think critically about what we read anymore??
mc is annoying as fuck. typical tired trope of pathetic unrequited love ml vs mc that treats him like shit until he gets jealous and realizes he likes him and chases him etc. also why do authors love to include first time sex scenes where the top does 0 foreplay it’s just painful and stupid to read