Guys, thank you for mentioning about the storyboard, pacing, and etc. Cause i always feel "something is not quite correct..." when i read this chapter (and maybe some other chapters that I don't quite remember which one is it) and i CAN'T really put the correct words or pin point what make me feel like some big gap in the transition of the panel, but when i read the comments, some of you point it out and i was like, "AHA!!! YES! THAT'S WHAT I MEAN"
(sometimes my brain is just not braining and English not even my second language so there's that )
Anyway... I LOVEEEE this story sm, ngl. I love their dynamics, the storyline and world building abt guideverse, the creatures, etc are also quite solid, i love the monologue with each characters, but yeah... The pacing, like some chapters have that "big gap" in the transition of the panel kinda keep bugging me for some reasons
I mean, i understand some artists have the maximum amount of panels in each chapters cause the editor teams (and the publisher/agency) literally told them to do so. Maybe in the process, there's some panels that got cut during the editing process
Guys, thank you for mentioning about the storyboard, pacing, and etc. Cause i always feel "something is not quite correct..." when i read this chapter (and maybe some other chapters that I don't quite remember which one is it) and i CAN'T really put the correct words or pin point what make me feel like some big gap in the transition of the panel, but when i read the comments, some of you point it out and i was like, "AHA!!! YES! THAT'S WHAT I MEAN"
(sometimes my brain is just not braining and English not even my second language so there's that )
Anyway... I LOVEEEE this story sm, ngl. I love their dynamics, the storyline and world building abt guideverse, the creatures, etc are also quite solid, i love the monologue with each characters, but yeah... The pacing, like some chapters have that "big gap" in the transition of the panel kinda keep bugging me for some reasons
I mean, i understand some artists have the maximum amount of panels in each chapters cause the editor teams (and the publisher/agency) literally told them to do so. Maybe in the process, there's some panels that got cut during the editing process