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i think it’s weird how it seems like the author makes several time-jumps happen each cha...

vixeyyy July 20, 2026 10:52 pm

i think it’s weird how it seems like the author makes several time-jumps happen each chapter and then has to pull out some bs storyline to continue the story. I mean the chapter after their honeymoon they state that it’s been 7/8 years since then,, LIKE I JUST READ IT???? now Amber hasn’t have his memories anymore and I just don’t see the point. Will the story finally end when he gets his memories back or will ANOTHER thing happen?

I always found sex talk in stories funny and a little bit overboard, but for this story I genuinely can’t take Amber saying “Tennessee” every single time seriously. It’s just such a mouth full. (pun-intended)

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    Yessie July 21, 2026 12:15 am

    Yeah, they could have at least included a box at the start that said ~8 years later or something lol