My own takeaway take it with a grain of salt, this was.. not that great.
Starting off with ML. Very straightforward, in some ways, sure you could call it hot. But he felt overly pushing, to move the relationship forward, to bond and to have children. I usually like it when MLs are a bit pushy but this wasn’t executed right for my tastes. The appearance of ml did not appeal me either. Idk I just couldn’t seem to get into it. Like the sunken cheekbones overall made him look much older.
Antagonist. Can I say it was poorly written? To go to such extent for the sake of inferiority and the motives felt really shallow. And i was repulsed. Writing such a repulsive antagonist with half assed shallow background is just meh. Whats more, I wish the OTHER victims were justified. Sweeping it all behind a rug felt icky. Overall, mid, bad pacing, mid characters
My own takeaway take it with a grain of salt, this was.. not that great.
Starting off with ML. Very straightforward, in some ways, sure you could call it hot. But he felt overly pushing, to move the relationship forward, to bond and to have children. I usually like it when MLs are a bit pushy but this wasn’t executed right for my tastes. The appearance of ml did not appeal me either. Idk I just couldn’t seem to get into it. Like the sunken cheekbones overall made him look much older.
Antagonist. Can I say it was poorly written? To go to such extent for the sake of inferiority and the motives felt really shallow. And i was repulsed. Writing such a repulsive antagonist with half assed shallow background is just meh. Whats more, I wish the OTHER victims were justified. Sweeping it all behind a rug felt icky. Overall, mid, bad pacing, mid characters