I’m really enjoying this story, but something just put me off. There is a chance this is a translation issue but for the writing to they aren’t total savages to the tribal group is so wrong. Using Middle Eastern, South Asian, and Tribal Characters isn’t new in historical stories, but what do you mean they aren’t totally savage? Especially after it says how the king annihilated the people who kidnapped his daughter. Rightfully so and I’m sure even the white people kingdom would do the same. Also is the prince the head of the black market? It’s one thing to run a black market totally different to own slaves.
I’m really enjoying this story, but something just put me off. There is a chance this is a translation issue but for the writing to they aren’t total savages to the tribal group is so wrong. Using Middle Eastern, South Asian, and Tribal Characters isn’t new in historical stories, but what do you mean they aren’t totally savage? Especially after it says how the king annihilated the people who kidnapped his daughter. Rightfully so and I’m sure even the white people kingdom would do the same. Also is the prince the head of the black market? It’s one thing to run a black market totally different to own slaves.