now i’m just crazy cause i didn’t see much wrong with the story, i will say the “war” arc was bland and was really just used as plot device to lengthen the story but besides that i don’t think there was huge issue with the characters especially the mc. like it’s shown in glimpses to us and in flashbacks, i do wish we got to see more of her backstory prior to badically transmigrating to show us why she has/had such abandonment issues in the first place along with the fact i like how they portray the perspective of a transmigrator badically taking over previous owner’s body and the guilt it holds over the person. the choice in ml i did not have a problem with either(?), like joshua is not a horrible toxic guy & he’s obviously grown up from when they were children i honestly like the choice in ml and the fact she ended up with the person who stayed with her during those years instead of the two other mls who really she knew from childhood and they were hung up on her since childhood. they clung onto and projected that version of her as a kid to the teen she grew up into & i personally didn’t like them that much especially when they were rather forceful in wanting to be with her.
overall i liked the story, but the war arc was semi ok i really only liked it for the furthering of the rs between lili and joshua. though it’s funny to see 3 of the evan’s bloodline lose to winston LOLLL
now i’m just crazy cause i didn’t see much wrong with the story, i will say the “war” arc was bland and was really just used as plot device to lengthen the story but besides that i don’t think there was huge issue with the characters especially the mc. like it’s shown in glimpses to us and in flashbacks, i do wish we got to see more of her backstory prior to badically transmigrating to show us why she has/had such abandonment issues in the first place along with the fact i like how they portray the perspective of a transmigrator badically taking over previous owner’s body and the guilt it holds over the person. the choice in ml i did not have a problem with either(?), like joshua is not a horrible toxic guy & he’s obviously grown up from when they were children i honestly like the choice in ml and the fact she ended up with the person who stayed with her during those years instead of the two other mls who really she knew from childhood and they were hung up on her since childhood. they clung onto and projected that version of her as a kid to the teen she grew up into & i personally didn’t like them that much especially when they were rather forceful in wanting to be with her.
overall i liked the story, but the war arc was semi ok i really only liked it for the furthering of the rs between lili and joshua. though it’s funny to see 3 of the evan’s bloodline lose to winston LOLLL