I really like how angsty this is but rather than it falling short, it just needs side stories. But yeah, I agree there should be a part where uke explained everything to seme but it got glossed over, so it still feels like there's a miscommunication issue between them. Other than that, it is still good, it just needs more meat to what happens to them afterwards.
I really like how angsty this is but rather than it falling short, it just needs side stories. But yeah, I agree there should be a part where uke explained everything to seme but it got glossed over, so it still feels like there's a miscommunication issue between them. Other than that, it is still good, it just needs more meat to what happens to them afterwards.