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Reading this feels like eating an egg without salt

Mochi July 23, 2026 5:54 pm

The bad thing about this story is that there's not enough flavor into it (it's fun to read though). plot wise: it has a good start with the whole misunderstanding stuff but theres some plot holes like the mc secret admirer. And one thing i noticed is that they never take things seriously (i mean they're still young so wtver)

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    GayDetectiveOnBoard July 24, 2026 1:31 am

    Same like.It's a really cute story but the writing could be better.

    justanotherhuman July 26, 2026 11:09 am

    What do you mean lacks in flavor? Lack spicy scenes or the story in general is just bland and boring?

    Mochi July 26, 2026 12:34 pm
    What do you mean lacks in flavor? Lack spicy scenes or the story in general is just bland and boring? justanotherhuman

    The story in general is kinda bland but it's not boring, it's one of those stories where you will read it just to pass time. The early chapters were intriguing and entertaining but near the end idk how to explain but it feels rush to me or it lack depths