what on earth is happening.. everything is moving so fast. even i thought the way mc's father's death felt so rushed i literally said "what?!" aloud. its like scenes are arranged like "this is what happened" "then this what happened after" no between. and the fast about her wanting those mana stones and her immortality became irrelevant right after going back. they could've just continued the story after mc got out of hell looking all badass but they ruined it with time travel and not executing it well.
well so far its still manageable so I'll give this a few more chapters before deciding to drop or not
what on earth is happening.. everything is moving so fast. even i thought the way mc's father's death felt so rushed i literally said "what?!" aloud. its like scenes are arranged like "this is what happened" "then this what happened after" no between. and the fast about her wanting those mana stones and her immortality became irrelevant right after going back. they could've just continued the story after mc got out of hell looking all badass but they ruined it with time travel and not executing it well.
well so far its still manageable so I'll give this a few more chapters before deciding to drop or not