I believe I hate read this story as I was annoyed with both Alpha and Omega, but for different reasons.
Alpha: In what world does forcefully restraining someone, even in a posh apartment, endear them to you?? Also, you're the ONLY one to smell a broken omega's pheromones, but you don't get yourself checked out with a doctor to make sure there isn't anything wrong with you. Your room of murder (hunting trophies) isn't a turn on to anybody who isn't you. Where did this fight against the matching system arise?? Did you fake a problem to reunite with your mate?? Suspicious.
Omega: You are forced to work for you half-brother as his secretary/punch bag, but that doesn't mean you should be a punching bag for others. You didn't learn any means of self-defense nor do you carry a stun gun despite knowing the crowd your brother hangs around with?? So you finally got away from your possessive alpha, but did you have to call and mock him one more time -- potentially revealing your location?? Sheesh. Also, telling him about his feelings instead of letting him figure them out himself won't feel earned when he repeats the words, you desperately want to hear, back to you. Lastly, where the heck have you been working to pay for your runaway lifestyle??
The Story: I like you. You smell good. Sex. Drama. I love you. I don't believe in love. Sex. Drama. I now believe in love. I never stopped loving you. The End. ☹
I think the one part I truly enjoyed was watching the Alpha bust into that sex party with his guns blazing to rescue the Omega.
Rating: 1.75 stars. Also, I ended up reading this story on another page due to the shoddy upload here of missing panels or panels overlapping each other. Not that it made the story better, but I wanted to be sure this story was mediocre.
I believe I hate read this story as I was annoyed with both Alpha and Omega, but for different reasons.
Alpha: In what world does forcefully restraining someone, even in a posh apartment, endear them to you?? Also, you're the ONLY one to smell a broken omega's pheromones, but you don't get yourself checked out with a doctor to make sure there isn't anything wrong with you. Your room of murder (hunting trophies) isn't a turn on to anybody who isn't you. Where did this fight against the matching system arise?? Did you fake a problem to reunite with your mate?? Suspicious.
Omega: You are forced to work for you half-brother as his secretary/punch bag, but that doesn't mean you should be a punching bag for others. You didn't learn any means of self-defense nor do you carry a stun gun despite knowing the crowd your brother hangs around with?? So you finally got away from your possessive alpha, but did you have to call and mock him one more time -- potentially revealing your location?? Sheesh. Also, telling him about his feelings instead of letting him figure them out himself won't feel earned when he repeats the words, you desperately want to hear, back to you. Lastly, where the heck have you been working to pay for your runaway lifestyle??
The Story: I like you. You smell good. Sex. Drama. I love you. I don't believe in love. Sex. Drama. I now believe in love. I never stopped loving you. The End. ☹
I think the one part I truly enjoyed was watching the Alpha bust into that sex party with his guns blazing to rescue the Omega.
Rating: 1.75 stars. Also, I ended up reading this story on another page due to the shoddy upload here of missing panels or panels overlapping each other. Not that it made the story better, but I wanted to be sure this story was mediocre.