The plot is starting to thicken but my only problem is it's only 28 chapters and they already like each other. I just feel like it's rushed just so we could get to this scandal arc quicker. I could maybe understand heejae's side since he sees his hyung's resemblance on yeonwoo but as for yeonwoo... well idk he likes him because he took him on a date that jhappened only once? Idk good sex and a date shouldn't really evoke that kind of reaction from him. What's more is that a good chunk of the chapters are just sex, not really adding to the depth of the characters. Love at first sight or smth else is just lazy writing. Oh yeah that was my main thought: good plot but mid writing. If it was paced better it would easily be on par with at the end of the road or kill the lights (other good possession BLs)
The plot is starting to thicken but my only problem is it's only 28 chapters and they already like each other. I just feel like it's rushed just so we could get to this scandal arc quicker. I could maybe understand heejae's side since he sees his hyung's resemblance on yeonwoo but as for yeonwoo... well idk he likes him because he took him on a date that jhappened only once? Idk good sex and a date shouldn't really evoke that kind of reaction from him. What's more is that a good chunk of the chapters are just sex, not really adding to the depth of the characters. Love at first sight or smth else is just lazy writing. Oh yeah that was my main thought: good plot but mid writing. If it was paced better it would easily be on par with at the end of the road or kill the lights (other good possession BLs)