I think you can take literally half of the characters who he helps out a better path away from the story and literally nothing but change like why do we go back to the old crown print after the first two chapters like I was expecting at least something to happen with him, but the fact that the only thing that happens to him is that he goes to another country does nothing and comes back. It’s literally so pointless like you literally did not need to add that it added nothing to the story.
I think you can take literally half of the characters who he helps out a better path away from the story and literally nothing but change like why do we go back to the old crown print after the first two chapters like I was expecting at least something to happen with him, but the fact that the only thing that happens to him is that he goes to another country does nothing and comes back. It’s literally so pointless like you literally did not need to add that it added nothing to the story.