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Flimsy Premise

the_great_correcter July 25, 2026 4:45 pm

Did I miss something?
Chapter 1: All players must clear the tower in 90 days or the world will end.
Very few chapters later: This is the official government testing facility, this is a high level player I've heard of before, there's laws and regulations...

Seems like the initial part of the story was just a kinda flimsy excuse for setting it up, instead of a well thought out premise. It's not an unenjoyable story so far (chapter 19), but the premise is so flimsy that it's hard to get any immersion out of it.

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