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Thoughts before I finish

Grum July 26, 2026 9:55 am

For startes it is nice to see an omega stand up for themselves and take hold of the power that they have been given.
Plot is super basic and easy to follow. Miscommunication seems to be the driving point and all of this could have been resolved with a conversation. I feel like the time jump was too long cause none of them matured since being in High School. I understand being 19 and thinking you know everything but come on it's been 7 years they should have matured somewhat yk.
I was not a fan of Mugwart getting a whole chapter and skipped the whole thing cause come on why would I care about what he was feeling!!!
If you're bored give it a read cause there are some funny parts and it's a fairly easy read

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