This story started good, I even thought of marinating it since I felt like this would have many chapters. But then I checked and it already ended? No story about the family? How the MC can work or provide for his family? Still in debt? Too many questions. The middle and end became too dry for my taste, I guessed they tried to put it in innocent terms or they just gave up. This had sm potential
This story started good, I even thought of marinating it since I felt like this would have many chapters. But then I checked and it already ended? No story about the family? How the MC can work or provide for his family? Still in debt? Too many questions. The middle and end became too dry for my taste, I guessed they tried to put it in innocent terms or they just gave up. This had sm potential