I get its slow burn but there's too many side conversations that doesnt add much to the story. A ton of unnecessary chatter and repeatedly say the same inner monologue I feel like I was having deja vu this could have been a short story 20-30 chapter max
I get its slow burn but there's too many side conversations that doesnt add much to the story. A ton of unnecessary chatter and repeatedly say the same inner monologue I feel like I was having deja vu this could have been a short story 20-30 chapter max