everything was so abrupt LMAO i get that it’s a short story and they need to pace it faster but the writing & dialogue is so bland. there’s no chemistry at all & all the scenes just don’t connect to one another.
everything was so abrupt LMAO i get that it’s a short story and they need to pace it faster but the writing & dialogue is so bland. there’s no chemistry at all & all the scenes just don’t connect to one another.