The writing is getting beyond my scope of patience lol. The author is so set on Joshua revealing the truth AT THE VERY END, that Joshua isn't even acting like a functioning person anymore. It's so obvious that he isn't able to talk like a normal person, bc the author doesn't know how else to write an excuse for prolonging the final reveal. Chase is on his knees CRYING for Josh to choose him and not the woman in Josh's life, and Josh's only response is: I like your face, you can meet my kid. AND CHASE SAYS NOTHING? JOSH SAYS NOTHING ELSE? I am ripping my hair out, I swear the writing wasn't this obviously lacking in the beginning
Like, he did not even addressed about the "Only the mother of my child" thing that's what making Chase so anxious.... I feel so frustrated because of the lack details lalala
That really is what sent me over. Chase is emotionally unstable bc of how anxious he is over Joshua’s wife/woman and Joshua still won’t even say, “I’m not with her anymore.” That is ABYSMAL writing. Just make something up! JUST GIVE ME ONE LINE.
The writing is getting beyond my scope of patience lol. The author is so set on Joshua revealing the truth AT THE VERY END, that Joshua isn't even acting like a functioning person anymore. It's so obvious that he isn't able to talk like a normal person, bc the author doesn't know how else to write an excuse for prolonging the final reveal. Chase is on his knees CRYING for Josh to choose him and not the woman in Josh's life, and Josh's only response is: I like your face, you can meet my kid. AND CHASE SAYS NOTHING? JOSH SAYS NOTHING ELSE? I am ripping my hair out, I swear the writing wasn't this obviously lacking in the beginning