This deserved to be at least like 80 chapters long. It feels more than an excellent prompt than a short story.
Like I would've loved to see the bottom's internal conflict have a moment. I feel as though the stroy could've explored how the bottom would fall for the top because with the top, he fell in love at first sight. So, anything goes with him, but the bottom could've been what gave it a strong thick substance of plot and development.
Like there's so much more to say. But it was a cute read I guess
This deserved to be at least like 80 chapters long. It feels more than an excellent prompt than a short story.
Like I would've loved to see the bottom's internal conflict have a moment. I feel as though the stroy could've explored how the bottom would fall for the top because with the top, he fell in love at first sight. So, anything goes with him, but the bottom could've been what gave it a strong thick substance of plot and development.
Like there's so much more to say. But it was a cute read I guess