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what is this pacing

Cietriz July 28, 2026 1:37 am

am i the only one who finds these change of events too fast?? why is our ml so easily influenced by a random chick and pointing a gun to his head? why are supposed body guards not able to take the gun off the lady? love the art but oh my god

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    danidanonino July 28, 2026 1:45 am

    Yes oh my god, the art is amazing and im sure the novel was too. But I feel like it’s rushed and it also feels like i never really go to see their relationship evolve other than rhem just having sex. Something is missing and i can’t quite put my finger on it.