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the ball was dropped, but i liked the first half

crowber July 28, 2026 4:55 am

i didnt understand the ending at all. the keymaster fight that the mc sacrificed himself for was so underwhelming and rushed i didnt even realize that it was supposed to be the final boss keymaster fight. the ending addressed nothing, it was so rushed i dont know if its even worth talking about, i might as well just forget it, in fact im already starting to.

the first half of the comic was really good, i enjoyed their relationship development. i liked the development of all the other characters as well.

the stupid dragon was annoying and pointless, he was completely forgotten, and the plot would be unscathed if he was removed. The gray hair guy at the end had no purpose and no character development. he was just there for mystery and jealousy, so whatever lol

overall its worth the read, just speed past the ending and pray for side stories lmfao

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    Shrub July 28, 2026 5:16 am

    ^^^ could not have explained it any better