I say the pacing is great, i like how they well paced the conflict and presented it from the very start while slowly feeding us the uke's past, the flashbacks are seamless(?) and quick its just a way to provide additional context, i appreciate that...
About the characters,
I think the uke is well written as of now, i think his actions are warranted like the reason why he didn't tried to expose the staff bcs he got ignored in the beginning so whats the point anymore, plus this dude is depressed so, i understand heavily... I think i really like him...
The seme is almost unbearable, the silver lining that i can get from this character is he is stupid and incompetent, he might be business savvy but he's pathetic in any way outside of that which i guess we don't get that a lot from alpha semes bcs yes he is one of the problem but the readers' anger is not focused on him bcs he is not the main problem/antagonist, he's just incompetent and ignorant... And i appreciate that..
I like that the main antagonist rn are the servants, but its sad that most of them are in the background and they are being carried by the butler... I actually hates the butler but he feels one dimensional??? Idk i just hate him bcs he's creepy...
I actually enjoy reading this just bcs of the uke being depressed and all lol i mostly wanna know about him alone and i think hes the most interesting character in the story which means so little btw lol
I say the pacing is great, i like how they well paced the conflict and presented it from the very start while slowly feeding us the uke's past, the flashbacks are seamless(?) and quick its just a way to provide additional context, i appreciate that...
About the characters,
I think the uke is well written as of now, i think his actions are warranted like the reason why he didn't tried to expose the staff bcs he got ignored in the beginning so whats the point anymore, plus this dude is depressed so, i understand heavily... I think i really like him...
The seme is almost unbearable, the silver lining that i can get from this character is he is stupid and incompetent, he might be business savvy but he's pathetic in any way outside of that which i guess we don't get that a lot from alpha semes bcs yes he is one of the problem but the readers' anger is not focused on him bcs he is not the main problem/antagonist, he's just incompetent and ignorant... And i appreciate that..
I like that the main antagonist rn are the servants, but its sad that most of them are in the background and they are being carried by the butler... I actually hates the butler but he feels one dimensional??? Idk i just hate him bcs he's creepy...
I actually enjoy reading this just bcs of the uke being depressed and all lol i mostly wanna know about him alone and i think hes the most interesting character in the story which means so little btw lol