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Also my guys carrys a survival backpack and no one bats an eye, or how its mentioned he was put on the hospital for being craz, lost memory etc and how he tried to end his life, those mentions are very brief but i would like if they got deeper so i am not lost cause while reading i was like "wait when did he get sent to a hospital for being paranoic?" and so i went back searching but it was never mentioned or it was really tiny bit
And yes while the pacing is weird u can piece out things but at the same time stuff are left out. Like on the early chapters uke is drinking with friend and seme calls him end of the chapter and the next they are together and u can like conect "seme called and they got together" but like what happened to the people he was drinking? And suddenly uke is very close to the pretty guy in school then his brother says the book name and never comes back. My guy coughs blood left and right and cant say "yea when i am stressed i start coughing blood" but nop, kinda sad how the story is very fresh and interesting bug this doesng make justice. I havent read the novel but many said its better so i u really like u should do that, i wont cause even with those little plot holes i kinda like how the main characters interact so ima stay for AND ONLY FOR their interactions how the seme always hold the uke in a love way that i find cute.