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Hot take: plot holes and bad writing

Purecocaine August 1, 2026 4:12 pm

I loved the story at the beginning and the idea behind it is great, BUT I feel like somewhere in the story the writer lost the goal
Also at some point it just felt like it was repeating itsself. Someone is mad -> throwback to 6 years in the past -> sexual tension but no solution to the problem
The art style is great, their interactions are great the sexual scenes are awesome (/^v^)/ - but the plot doesn't flow smoothly and questions stay unanswered

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