It's great but kinda .. off? FL gotta have some luck boost as well because she is getting opportunities left and right. Not saying she didn't deserve it but certain areas of story felt like a perfectly fitted puzzle piece she's been looking for.
OMG YES!!! I WAS THINKING ABOUT THIS WHILE READING, the story is nice but there are a few things that are off
It's great but kinda .. off? FL gotta have some luck boost as well because she is getting opportunities left and right. Not saying she didn't deserve it but certain areas of story felt like a perfectly fitted puzzle piece she's been looking for.