def not sob sob sob worthy but i think it’s more the concept of 2 people finding each other at the right time only for it to end in tragedy. it sort of makes sense that they liked eachother quickly given circumstances i guess.. kinda cliche plot but it’s a good stepping stone for future (hopefully longer) stories
I agree, but I do understand them falling for each other at rapid pace, it's just that the storytelling falls short of enriching that experience for the readers (at least me, personally). Welp, either way it's decent for a debut ig
I'm definitely overreacting, I was lowkey thinking this was a just a short vague smut story but I do agree the story would have been better if the characters had more depth and actual romance. I did not in fact know it was a tragic story which is is kind of crazy that I didn't pick up on that feeling. Definitely made me SHOCKED when it came down to his death. I will say it is a great story but again I do agree that the pace was way too fast and the way they introduced each other in the middle of their make out session was lowkey ummmm interesting. (￣∇￣")
Are y'all overreacting or am I the one who's underreacting bc this wasn't sad at all. Maybe it's due to the reason that I already knew this is a tragedy, but seriously, how am I supposed to feel attached to characters who knew/interacted with each other for practically only two days before getting their ass handed?? Moreover they just fucked everytime. Everything was extremely fast paced and the characters were shallowly written. but hey no shit sherlock, it only has 8 chps
Honestly, it would've been better if it was extended to 20 chps max. The tragedy would've been well executed, but it's obvious the author chose porn over plot. It's probably their first work, so imo they have a lot of potential