IM ON CHAP 35
Love the side couple, i need more of them. I dont like how drawn out the rape scenes are, it's so unnecessary that I might think it's written to be a pórn which i hope NOT cuz that would be a really bad taste. Why did they have sex right after as if uke didnt just suffer a very traumatic experience that would definitely give him ptsd? Ugh this manhwa used to be so promising? The sanbeom something is suppose to be villain obsessed with the uke right? Why suddenly a 360 as if the author trashed the idea? Changed mind last minute?
Like i said this USED to be so good, such an amazing premise that couldve had so much potential for lots of conflict and character development. Now with how the story is progressing, it seems like the author doesnt know what to do with the plot anymore, i feel like they want protagonists to be together but have no idea how to get them there lol. I also get pissed with the narration like the author's trying so hard to be poetic it just ends up like word vomit that doesnt make and any sense and doesnt include anything important or substantial to the story at all, those flowery passages doesnt make me feel any emotion at all. Like a try hard
IM ON CHAP 41 and I QUIT.
You know what made me finally drop this? I had enough of the CORNY ASS NARRATION.
"Burning imprint of gentle insistence"??? What the fck is that? Like genuinely what does that mean??? Is this translation error becuz it only makes sense in korean? Whatever im done. Fanfic writers write better that this, atleast their metaphors makes sense
OH HE'S ON THE BACKBURNER, CRISPING UP. I love the angst. Toxic uke feels refreshing. Idc what everyone says here this is good sht right here trust me