Don’t even get me STARTED on how unrealistic the MCs carelessness with his child is. Like the main obstacle for him right now is the fear that the kid will get taken away from him and yet he’s so careless with him.
Also wouldn’t the kid have school? The writing would be more convincing if the kid kept on getting intercepted at school rather than the MC being a complete idiot when it came to parenting (LIKE HE HAD BEEN A SINGLE PARENT FOR HOW LONG AND YET HE ACTS LIKE HE TOOK UP THE POSITION A WEEK AGO)
Don’t even get me STARTED on how unrealistic the MCs carelessness with his child is. Like the main obstacle for him right now is the fear that the kid will get taken away from him and yet he’s so careless with him.
Also wouldn’t the kid have school? The writing would be more convincing if the kid kept on getting intercepted at school rather than the MC being a complete idiot when it came to parenting (LIKE HE HAD BEEN A SINGLE PARENT FOR HOW LONG AND YET HE ACTS LIKE HE TOOK UP THE POSITION A WEEK AGO)