I feel like the pacing is so off and 80% is just characters thoughts that don’t do anything or standing around. There’s so little movement of actual plot or urgency, so even though it started nice I’m actually kinda bored now…
I feel like the pacing is so off and 80% is just characters thoughts that don’t do anything or standing around. There’s so little movement of actual plot or urgency, so even though it started nice I’m actually kinda bored now…